man....the story was too short he just met to Victor and that's all....and also I was nearly forgot that I have to read this story I think ur delaying the parts also story get stretched...murdo ki train Mei like 2-3 scenes hote the kuch 3 Tak main points pata chalte the but now look how short u have made it..... that's all. everything else is going gud
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man....the story was too short he just met to Victor and that's all....and also I was nearly forgot that I have to read this story I think ur delaying the parts also story get stretched...murdo ki train Mei like 2-3 scenes hote the kuch 3 Tak main points pata chalte the but now look how short u have made it..... that's all. everything else is going gud
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अपने प्रिय लेखक को सब्सक्राइब करें और सुपरफैन बनें !
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