बेपनाह मौहब्बत बनाम बेइंतहा नफरत 9

ho sake to ye story part 10th se phir se likhe kyunki aap new end to aisa kiya hai jaise kisi ne maar pit kar jabardasti aapko end karne ko kaha ho. sorry but it's true. aapki story bahut achhi chal rahi thi or aage bhi bahut achha ho Sakta tha. hamare emotions ko bhi samjhe ham bhi bahut man se padte hai or aisa super fast end expect nai karte so plz phir ek bar or soche kya aapke story ka end sahi hai.

Radhe Radhe maa ne hi beti per viswas nahi kiya to aur kisi se kya umeed kare,socha nahi maa ne ek baar bhi ki humari parwarish kabhi koi galat kaam nahi karegi jisse maa ki aankhe saram se juk jaaye Radhe Radhe

Nice story but iski ending sahi nhi hai,.. iske hr part me Aahan ka bigda hua rup mila hai,.. isliye kahani ke end me Aahan ki death nhi balki kuch aisa hona chahiye tha,.. jisase kuch sikh mile...