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साँस लेना भी कैसी आदत है, जिये जाना भी क्या रवायत हैै! पाँव बेहिस हैं चलते जाते हैं, एक सफर है जो चलता रहता है!! गुलजार साहब की ये लाइनें हमारे जीवन की हकीकत बयां करती हैं ! हर व्यक्ति जीवन के ...

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ड़ा मीरा रामनिवास (रिटायर्ड भारतीय पुलिस सेवा अधिकारी) लेखन, भ्रमण, ट्रेकिंग में रूचि ।बागवानी , संगीत श्रवण, साहित्य पठन, जैसे शौक हैं प्रकृति को निहारना, बच्चों के साथ बातें करना , बुजुर्गों के साथ बैठना ,स्कूल कालेज में सम सामयिक विषयों पर व्याख्यान देना अच्छा लगता है। सामाजिक मूल्य और प्रकृति मेरे लेखन को प्रभावित करते हैं ।

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  • author
    आपकी रेटिंग

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    Modnath Mishra
    05 సెప్టెంబరు 2015
    The story "jeevan ek anant yatra" Written by meeram nivas is awesome  the poet narrated the things, centering the neem tree generally the neem tree found in villages and the whole story is moving behind the rural surrounding viz imotinol  feeling, love and affection,  psycological  attachment and bond with the relationship.   The story itself describe entire rural attachment between the parents.  Now  a days we could not find such attachment  and love and affection.   The story writer wants to describe the humanitarian touch in the society   I wish and want to encourage the story writer meera ramnivas to keep her pen ready to describe  such stories in future.  I wish my heartiest warm feelings.  
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    विजय मीणा
    06 సెప్టెంబరు 2015
    I felt touched by your story very nicely written and described. Context is very well explained . I visualized while reading. Keep up the good work. Apne bahot hi sarahniye kaam Kiya hai. Ye kahani itna aache tarike se llikhi gayi hai ki aap iska drishtyankan kar sakte hai. Vishey aam hote huye bhi khash hai. Karunamayee,marmik aur Hriday sparshi anubhav raha aapki kahani ka. Dhanyawad.    
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    Jassal G Singh
    05 సెప్టెంబరు 2015
    Ma'm, I would like to congratulate for your soul touchi story " Jeevan Ek Anant Katha "...Title itself speak the endless story of a common man who passes through plenty of sentiments during his journey of Life...He comes across the worst & best phase of life but finally he knows that what would be the final destiny. ...It's crux of life through which every one passes...
  • author
    आपकी रेटिंग

  • कुल टिप्पणी
  • author
    Modnath Mishra
    05 సెప్టెంబరు 2015
    The story "jeevan ek anant yatra" Written by meeram nivas is awesome  the poet narrated the things, centering the neem tree generally the neem tree found in villages and the whole story is moving behind the rural surrounding viz imotinol  feeling, love and affection,  psycological  attachment and bond with the relationship.   The story itself describe entire rural attachment between the parents.  Now  a days we could not find such attachment  and love and affection.   The story writer wants to describe the humanitarian touch in the society   I wish and want to encourage the story writer meera ramnivas to keep her pen ready to describe  such stories in future.  I wish my heartiest warm feelings.  
  • author
    विजय मीणा
    06 సెప్టెంబరు 2015
    I felt touched by your story very nicely written and described. Context is very well explained . I visualized while reading. Keep up the good work. Apne bahot hi sarahniye kaam Kiya hai. Ye kahani itna aache tarike se llikhi gayi hai ki aap iska drishtyankan kar sakte hai. Vishey aam hote huye bhi khash hai. Karunamayee,marmik aur Hriday sparshi anubhav raha aapki kahani ka. Dhanyawad.    
  • author
    Jassal G Singh
    05 సెప్టెంబరు 2015
    Ma'm, I would like to congratulate for your soul touchi story " Jeevan Ek Anant Katha "...Title itself speak the endless story of a common man who passes through plenty of sentiments during his journey of Life...He comes across the worst & best phase of life but finally he knows that what would be the final destiny. ...It's crux of life through which every one passes...