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*अकेलापन* कड़ी धूप में चलते चलते जब अचानक ही चेहरे पर पानी की फुहार पड़ने लगे,तो कितना सुकून देने वाला होता है वो वक़्त ,मन करता है जैसे बस यही रुककर आँखे बंद करके खड़े हो जाये। पर एक जगह पर रुकना संभव...

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  • author
    आपकी रेटिंग

  • कुल टिप्पणी
  • author
    Nisha Rajoriya
    12 मई 2022
    bhut khub
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    Suresh Kumar Yadav
    13 नवम्बर 2022
    Sometimes waiting .... to someone for some reason seems waiting for a long time but his/her arrival makes he/she happy. Same circumstances herein with Neha, she is waiting because of her love ❤ but Sumit never comes because he doesn't love her. They are friends only and leading their lives alone. Script of the story is good. Your writing skills - fantastic . I appreciate it and wish to be a top Writer in the list of Writers .Best of luck. God bless you. Thanks & Regards
  • author
    chandra bhushan singh
    20 फ़रवरी 2022
    Aacha likhti hai.lsi tarah likhte rahiye.
  • author
    आपकी रेटिंग

  • कुल टिप्पणी
  • author
    Nisha Rajoriya
    12 मई 2022
    bhut khub
  • author
    Suresh Kumar Yadav
    13 नवम्बर 2022
    Sometimes waiting .... to someone for some reason seems waiting for a long time but his/her arrival makes he/she happy. Same circumstances herein with Neha, she is waiting because of her love ❤ but Sumit never comes because he doesn't love her. They are friends only and leading their lives alone. Script of the story is good. Your writing skills - fantastic . I appreciate it and wish to be a top Writer in the list of Writers .Best of luck. God bless you. Thanks & Regards
  • author
    chandra bhushan singh
    20 फ़रवरी 2022
    Aacha likhti hai.lsi tarah likhte rahiye.